Frick Yah!

Awesome! Sounds really good! Kinda long, but good.

Little slow

I like it, but its a little slow (Try and ad some excitement to it). If it had a slightly bigger range of volume it would be better. Not to be offensive, but its like listening to a monotoned person, let it build up!

Fresh

I love the way the music and vocals go together. It would sound better if the microphone wasn't so close to the mouth. Try and remove some of the breaths being picked up by the microphone by moving away from it a little. It sounds promising!